Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Friday, April 17, 2020
8 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Ryder,
ReplyDeleteWhat a fantastic job you have done of this weeks reading task. It is easy to tell that you have put a lot of effort into your work! I hope you enjoy this weeks task :)
Thank you I am a really good dawer
DeleteHi Ryder
ReplyDeleteGreat work for reading. I agree with Miss Lover you have really put a lot of effort into your work especially the art work. Have you read any books while you have been on lockdown?
I read everyday. I have read Goosbumps, bad guys, the beast of buckingham palace. lots of chapter books and picture books to my sister
DeleteHi Ryder,
ReplyDeleteWow! you have done a really good recount of your reading. I like that you have included a beginning, middle and end. I would like a magical wand that worked and made me lunch, but probably not butterfly pie. Yuck! What would you have for lunch if you had a magic wand?
the biggest bowel in the world of mac and cheese
DeleteHi Ryder
ReplyDeleteGreat work on your reading! You have written lots of information from the story including what the characters said. I love the colour you added to your pictures and the butterfly coming out of the pie.
thank you
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