Ninja Dogs
Once upon a time there were 2 big dogs. One was called Mr Ninja he was black and white and he had a ferice looking sord he had razor sharp teth. Ninja Toby was Brown he had sparky red eyes and is play full. one day the dogs went to the pool becose they love swimming they all always like to do big jump in to the pool for fun some times they posh each othire in to the deep warm pool but when they got in it started to rain so they ran back home on Mr Ninjas fluffy back.when thay got back home thay went to sleep.
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Hi Ryder, great piece of writing about the Ninja Dogs! You have used a wide range of adjectives to describe your animals and it paints a clear picture for your readers. Well done :)
ReplyDeletethank you so much
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