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Friday, April 17, 2020

Week one- Writting





7 comments:

  1. Hi Ryder,
    What a great idea for service. When we spoke about this yesterday, you were so proud of your efforts. You're writing is easy to follow, and as a reader it is clear the steps you took. Are you going to keep helping mum clean the rabbit hutch? :)

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  2. thank you
    yes i am going to help mum all the time now

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  3. Hi Ryder
    Firstly what cute rabbits you have and it was great meeting them yesterday.
    You make it seem easy to clean the hutch and look after your rabbits.
    Do you have any other pets?

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  4. Hi Ryder
    I like how clear your plan was and your writing told me all the steps you did to take care of them. It looks like they have a lot of grass to play on. Do you let them run around in the garden sometimes? What are your rabbits' names?
    Rachel

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  5. all the time they are playing on the grass. My rabbits names are shadow and snuggle

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  6. hi ryder i think it was smart picking to help your rabbits and your mum

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