Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Friday, April 17, 2020
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Hi Ryder,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great idea for service. When we spoke about this yesterday, you were so proud of your efforts. You're writing is easy to follow, and as a reader it is clear the steps you took. Are you going to keep helping mum clean the rabbit hutch? :)
thank you
ReplyDeleteyes i am going to help mum all the time now
Hi Ryder
ReplyDeleteFirstly what cute rabbits you have and it was great meeting them yesterday.
You make it seem easy to clean the hutch and look after your rabbits.
Do you have any other pets?
no
DeleteHi Ryder
ReplyDeleteI like how clear your plan was and your writing told me all the steps you did to take care of them. It looks like they have a lot of grass to play on. Do you let them run around in the garden sometimes? What are your rabbits' names?
Rachel
all the time they are playing on the grass. My rabbits names are shadow and snuggle
ReplyDeletehi ryder i think it was smart picking to help your rabbits and your mum
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